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Will Time Show? by ~E-t-F:iconE-t-F:



When do you know its time to say goodbye?

Two people stand, staring.
Back to back.
You, into the horizon.
Me, into the reflection.
Where I watch your back as it s t a r t s  t o . . .  f  a  d  e
                                                                                       i  n  t  o     t  h  e    
                                                                                                                      s    k    y.


Am I going blind?
Hardly now can I trace your outline.
Was it meant to be this moment? This day?
When us two do not look the same way?

     A silence is in the air. So cold. So stale.
        The lips, the will not move.
             Unbelievable but cryptic is the atmosphere.

One on their knees.

                           One a step forward.

         A rift now literally visible.

When one walks away, do not two hearts scream in unison?


                   A pause.

                                          Shall she turn?


                                                                  For even goodbyes should not be like this.



But when hearts are                                                                                   still calling,


                                             is it time?                         Is it right?


                                                                    She does not turn.  Not a sound.
                                                                              Nor a sign escapes the scene.

Is this when you know?

              Is this what time shows?

                                      No longer can I see your reflection.


            Tell me, is a foot bound to the very ground that you wish to escape?

     When do you know its time to pry that foot free and l e a v e

E v e n   t h o s e   w   o  r  d   s   b e h i n d   y o u ?
©2009 ~E-t-F
:icone-t-f:

Author's Comments

Wasn't sure how to categorize this one. It's just kinda something different for me. The poem can be read and looked at so many different ways. It's exactly how my mind was and still is going about this whole situation. Roar. So read it however you want. however many times you want. Hell, i will too. See how this story ends.

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